I thought that every one did a great job, considering that this was the first time getting up in front of a new group of people and speaking.
Korie: I thought her topic was really funny. I liked that she asked questions "Have any of you lost a cell phone? Have any of you dug through the subway trash to find a cell phone." I think it would have been great if she would have called on Andrew and asked him about his experience digging through the trash. It would have been a great way to lead into her speech. I know April must not have enjoyed digging through the trash! :)
Needs to work on slowing down.
Whitney: I thought she had a nice topic because she was writing about a movie and place that really inspired her. I think that her visual was nice--everyone in the room was paying attention during that time. And it was great that she introduced her visual. I think she could work on tone and make sure that she emphasizes important parts in her speech.
April: I thought she did a really good job of speaking in a story-telling voice. She used a lot of gestures throughout her speech which helped keep her audience's attention. I think she could work on eye-contact a bit more and hold eye-contact for a longer period of time.
Zach: Zach had a great speaking voice. It was loud and everyone could hear him. I love the description of his arm breaking and the school nurse. He got some laughs from this. Good job. Eye-contact and gestures need some work. Overall, the audience was engaged and liked his speech.
Jessica: I loved Jessica's quote at the beginning of her speech. She seemed a bit timid and shy to tell this story about her first blind date. That's okay, it's natural to feel this way when you are performing for the first time. I liked her pace. I thought she went slow and was careful to follow through with the lines of her speech. I do think she will need to work on eye contact and pausing between questions to give her audience time to answer and respond.
Kellie:
I really enjoyed hearing this story about Danielle. Most every one knows Danielle and could picture her popping up in someone else's tube. I like that Kellie created suspense in her speech by discussing how she was a terrible swimmer and how Danielle was a great swimmer. The audience was engaged and waiting for the embarrassing moment. She had great tone and fluctuation in her voice. She can work on eye-contact and making sure she slows down at the beginning of her speech.
Christopher Robin:
I thought your speech was great. I wished that Chris would have included a visual--like the pictures of his ruined tires. I think he would have got more laughs from that. Chris needs to work on looking up and holding eye-contact for a longer period of time. I think he needs to work on tone and consider fluctuation. He naturally speaks in a soft tone so I think some of the word activities might help him feel more comfortable changing his speech. Show a little more enthusiasm. SMILE! :)
Great job overall! I think by the end of this semester you will feel a lot more comfortable about speaking in front of a large group. Keep it up!