Kellie did a good job telling people about Halloween and it was pretty interesting to find out some thing I didn't know I also really liked her CANDY!!! :)
Korie did a good visual and it was very interesting and it definitely was focused on the grade! :)
April: I think I did pretty good... I like my visual :) and I thought mine was interesting! I learned a lot!
Chris: I liked your speech a lot and it made me realize I have to get my oil changed so I am going on friday! You visual was also really good and so I didn't know what some of those things were :)
Jessica: Your speech made me sad and I thought it was good that you put your own experiences into your speech because it made it less boring, because you know what happens from experiences... I think a way to help though is to kind of make a better flow of you paper... I felt like you jumped around a lot but overall it was very good and got the point across
Whitney: I think your speech was interesting and like I said about Jessica's speech I liked how you added your own experiences to your speech it made it more interesting :) I think practicing helps with being able to not mess up on words... you get lost in your speech... You need to fluctuate your voice more...
Zach: Your speech would have been better if you would have finished it and maybe show a visual :)
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