Respond to Speech to Entertain

I think that I did a pretty good job for my first speech. I should have slowed down at the beginning of my story,so that people would be able to understand what I was talking about. Pre-reading with different people was very helpful, So that I found some of my mistakes so then I could fix them.

Kellie: You did a great job, and made people laugh. some advice would be to go a little bit slower at the beginning of your story.

April: your speech was really good, it made people laugh, and you took your time telling your story.

Whitney: you did a good job at making eye contact with people. ONe thing that you may want to practice is reading your speech several times, so that you dont lose your place while your giving your speech. The movie clip was a great idea to use for your props.

Jessica: I think your speech was good. I do think that you should have went into more description and more detail about that night and your lovely date.