Zach: ;I think that your speech could have been a lot better if you would have finished your speech. everyone loves music, so you had a good speech topic, you could have made it more interesting and better.

Chris: your speech was good, i learned some things about cars and how to take care of it. good job on your speech!

Whitney: overall your speech was okay. you need to practice more, and annunciate your words. your very monotone, and you need to fluctuate your tone.

Response to Speeches to Inform Cont'd

Whitney- Your speech had good information.
Next time I would try to practice more so you don't stumble over as many words.
And I would try to find a visual next time, it makes the speech more fun to listen to.

Zach- Your speech would have been awesome if you would have finished it.
I thought you had good information.

Kellie- I definitely talked too fast again.
Hopefully next time I will talk normal.
I felt more comfortable this time, but I thought the first speech was more fun to give.

I think Everyone did a pretty decent job, but there were a few that were really good. I really liked Aprils speech, It was a really big problem and it is something that affects most of us. She also had really good visuals.
Kellie- Good job on the speech, I learned about the holladay, but you talked fast towards the end.
Jessica- Good job, it was very informative, and emotional.
Korie- You did a good job but need more eye contact.
April- Your speech was very interesting and the topic was perfect because most of the audience probably has pets.
Whitney- You did a good job, but it was very short, and at times I had trouble staying interested
Zach- Good job on what you did get done, I was actually mad because you didn't have it done.

Speeches to Inform

I pretty much think every one did really good, except me, mine was a fail, it was only half done. I think Chris's speech was probably the one that caught my attention the most because I am more into cars then I am halloween and the other speeches (I don't even remember the other speeches).

April- Yours was depressing, but it was a really good speech, it caught everyones attention and it was well planned but was smooth so it didn't look like a routine.

Response to Speech to inform!

I think over all everyone did a pretty well job.

Kellie did a good job telling people about Halloween and it was pretty interesting to find out some thing I didn't know I also really liked her CANDY!!! :)

Korie did a good visual and it was very interesting and it definitely was focused on the grade! :)

April: I think I did pretty good... I like my visual :) and I thought mine was interesting! I learned a lot!

Chris: I liked your speech a lot and it made me realize I have to get my oil changed so I am going on friday! You visual was also really good and so I didn't know what some of those things were :)

Jessica: Your speech made me sad and I thought it was good that you put your own experiences into your speech because it made it less boring, because you know what happens from experiences... I think a way to help though is to kind of make a better flow of you paper... I felt like you jumped around a lot but overall it was very good and got the point across

Whitney: I think your speech was interesting and like I said about Jessica's speech I liked how you added your own experiences to your speech it made it more interesting :) I think practicing helps with being able to not mess up on words... you get lost in your speech... You need to fluctuate your voice more...

Zach: Your speech would have been better if you would have finished it and maybe show a visual :)

Response to inform speech

April: your speech was great:) and I learned a lot about animal shelters and what they do to the poor animals when they kill them.

Kellie: halloween is amazing, and I think you did great on your speech. talked a little bit to fast at the beginning but then you slowed down and took your time! It was great!

Jessica: I like how you picked a topic so close to home! it was very touching to you. but you did a good job. I think that you should practice your speech a bit more to make it a little bit better and know where your spot is after you look up. other then that it was good!

Me: I think i did an okay job, It was kind of a nerve wrecking topic to talk about in front of a whole bunch of my class mates. but oh well. I guess it turned out okay.

Response to Speeches to Inform

April- Your speech was great :)
It was very interesting, and your visual was awesome.
Now I want to adopt a dog!

Jessica- I thought your speech was good :)
It was very emotional, and I liked how you could relate to it.
I think you are very strong for finishing your speech!

Korie- Haha I loved your speech :)
I'm glad I now know more about sex.
It was very informative, I think this kind of thing should be taught more throughout the school.
Good Job!

Chris- I thought your speech was good, the visual was nice because I didn't really know what any of the stuff you were talking about was until I saw it, except for the oil. :)